it was a good start
I like the premise of the story, and the comical way the protagonist refers to toast as his "tosti" and does the little "woowoowoo" thing, lol. And although I'm the last one who has any business saying Naruto music is overdone (*cough*seeNinjaMario*cough*) I still think it might have been better if you'd chosen another kind of music. :P Maybe something with a more metal feel to it.
The sketches were good, but they were just that, sketches. You ought to put more effort into it and incorporate complete characters and colors into your movie. It's just not a complete movie yet. ;) Still, it made me laugh, so you get brownie points for that. :P